Wednesday, October 2, 2019

Man Alone Seems Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life's born, grows,
And soon leaves the lair,
Winter slumbers
Whilst in open air,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 October 2019

UR A GREAT POET NATURAL NOW DO READ AND COMMENT ON MY CDN 1 TO 10 POEMS THANKS I VALUE U

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 October 2019

Yes sir, but what is CDN? Come on, I'm too old for such abbreviations. And thanks for the first line, without it also I'd have complied! ! ! Good seeing you after a gap.

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Savita Tyagi 03 October 2019

beautiful expressions. We are too involved in our small world and always neglect a vast and magnificient life throbbing around us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 October 2019

Very true, thanks for the feedback.

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Valsa George 03 October 2019

When Nature and all creatures in it rejoice, man alone is lost in his dark thoughts. He cannot sing carols of joy as he is caught in the tangles of life! A realistic picture of man's life on Earth! A 10

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 October 2019

Thank you dear poet. I had never though, this poem will attract so much attention. But all I did was: convert a four-liner thing into small phrases easy to read.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2019

Whilst in open air, Bees begin to stir, Birds on their wings, Butterflies dance, Nature's out everywhere, ......nice poetic expression. Beautiful poem on nature is amazingly shared. Thank you for sharing here.

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 October 2019

You're right, nature; s out everywhere, man is not on the same page as nature, Thank you dear Kumarmaniji for reading this poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 October 2019

Man ‘lone seems lost— In dreams of a warm spring, ../// beautiful expression Man by born alone but not alone like that womb on this earth the nature beautiful accompanying path........///

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 October 2019

Thank you dear Mahtab for your words of appreciation.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 02 October 2019

man's anxiety and agitation make him feel lonly. well brought out

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 October 2019

Thanks dear poet, , your feedback is appreciated.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 October 2019

A well composed poem, sir Aniruddha...10++

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 October 2019

Thank you Rev Bernard for reading and rating it

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