Sunday, August 21, 2016

Mama The Guardian Angel Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mama, for nine months we connected
My world in you was amazing
I depended on you fully
We shared a plate and a cup
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Rose Kanana
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Ruth Nyokabi 10 September 2016

Very inspiring, taking the walk into a mums shoe...Good piece Rose.

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James Mwenda 06 September 2016

Great observation here You cheered me as a child You cheered me as a teenager You cheered me as a young adult You cheered me while i wore black gowns You still await the white gown hahaha Are you the guardian angel i was promised?

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Jane Biashara 29 August 2016

yes the white gown! or colour of your choice for i know you as a designer. but am not worried coz you are everything to me

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Collins Waswa 26 August 2016

A good reflection of mothers care and dedication In your hands lay the feeble me You understood my language of cry

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 August 2016

I depended on you! ! Life and birth. Nice piece of work.

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 21 August 2016

Wow beautiful. I broke your valuables in my walk effort You smiled at my mess as a sign of a greater value. That is so real. Thank you for sharing! My 10 for you!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 21 August 2016

A beautifully envisioned poem. Yes, mother is the guardian angel for her off spring. Thanks for sharing this beautifully inked poem.10 points.

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Charity Karimi 21 August 2016

This is amazing, well written Rose a 10 from me.

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