Tuesday, August 8, 2006

Mama Didn'T Come Comments

Rating: 5.0

You went to sleep with your heart breaking,
A little boy of only ten,
With anticipation all day waiting,
She didn't come again,
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Vallerie Lobell
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Marilyn Lott 24 June 2007

Such a sad but true poem. This is happening more all the time and you put it so well. You are a great poet, Vallerie! Marilyn

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fanniesson - 14 September 2006

tear jerker and as with all your works good tight rhyming must drive you nuts the rhyming that is

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