Saturday, November 21, 2020

Mama Comments

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I cannot take my care,
I do not want to care.
Nothing is wrong with me but I am utterly in despair.
I want stay at my home a little longer.
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Randhir kaur
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Valsa George 23 November 2020

When parents give us guidance and advice, we don't pay heed to them! When we land in danger, we realize that our parents only wanted our well being! This late realization make us remorseful and we begin to miss our parents badly! It is not late to mend your actions and start life afresh with courage and hope....! Indeed a touching write!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 22 November 2020

Like a beautiful daughter. Mama, I miss your scolding, I miss your face, I miss my home And your lovely embrace. Very emotional and a touching poem, dear Poetess Randhir! There is nothing more comfortable than in the arms of a Mother. Mother is the epitome of unconditional and selfless love.......Top stars

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Khairul Ahsan 21 November 2020

'But I am harsh upon myself, Which is not fair.' - True, it's not fair. 'My boat full of dreams is drowning' - cheer up, dear poet. You have said in your 'About Me', I quote, 'the greatest glory in the life is not winning but rising every time whenever you fall down.' My very best wishes for a fellow poet who is currently in an uncomfortable situation that will be hopefully over soon.

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