Friday, November 27, 2015

Mama Comments

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I carry your words.
I remember your voice,
It's like poison choking my neck,
To the depth of my soul,
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Anzelyne shideshe
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Edward Kofi Louis 21 May 2016

Gone! ! But, i still remember your voice. Nice piece of work.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 27 November 2018

Thanks for a perusal

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Kim Barney 01 January 2016

I miss my mama, too, even though I have lived much longer than she ever lived to be. Please read my poem MEMORIES OF MOTHER. I enjoyed this poem very much. Thanks for sharing it.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 05 January 2016

you welcome KIM

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 November 2015

for you are my tears, To my last breath. I carry you as a scret, for you are sacred, I'm missing you mummy, After reading your poem i was just thinking how lucky you mummy to have such a loving daughter who writes poems about her. wonderful poem dear Poetess. Tony

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Anzelyne Shideshe 29 November 2015

Thanks typing error scret is meant to be secret.Thanks.

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