Friday, September 22, 2006

Mama Comments

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Mama where are you...
When I feel your presence near?
Mama where are you?
When I hear your voice plain and clear?
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Vallerie Lobell 22 September 2006

I'm wearing the shoe on the other foot...it is my son I lost....the poem is great and honors all the good Ednas in the world.....thanks Vallerie

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 22 September 2006

My mother, Edna was/is a wonderful person. I will always have deep respect for her as a woman 1st. And in most cases, I'm sure I'm not the exception, the appreciation we have for our mothers becomes more apparent when they have passed on! But their influence remains intact in a way that can not be described. it has to be heartfelt! Thank you for your comments! Best wishes...L

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Dawn Michelle 22 September 2006

~Aw, that was so beautiful, and touching~

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Duncan Wyllie 22 September 2006

This is one of the most endearing and touching poems I have read, beautiful, timeless and well..., just wonderful Top marks for a top guy Love duncan X

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