Sunday, December 11, 2022

Mall Road Comments

Rating: 5.0

Barren like a broken beam
Bare like a bookstore without customers
The road has lost its glory
The magic, the story
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Nosheen Irfan
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Anjandev Roy 12 December 2022

This is an exceptional piece.......thanks for sharing...

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Loved this nostalgic poem. Change is the only one that does not change!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 December 2022

Loved your poem dear Nosheen.......Top marks and to my favourite as well.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 December 2022

Wonderful poem Nosheen! You are able to capture the beauty and sentiment of both people and places.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 December 2022

A wonderful poem. This poem can be viewed from many angles. I just imagine the fate of a book store sans customers. I like this poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 December 2022

Nosheen I can't even go into the Mall at Christmas I get overwelmn

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David Wood 11 December 2022

Excellent write Nosheen we are all guilty of passing by, I buy online and haven't carried cash for over a decade. But your poem also applies to families who pass on by each other and to the elderly who never get a visit. Top marks again.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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