Barren like a broken beam
Bare like a bookstore without customers
The road has lost its glory
The magic, the story
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Loved this nostalgic poem. Change is the only one that does not change!
Loved your poem dear Nosheen.......Top marks and to my favourite as well.
Wonderful poem Nosheen! You are able to capture the beauty and sentiment of both people and places.
A wonderful poem. This poem can be viewed from many angles. I just imagine the fate of a book store sans customers. I like this poem.
Nosheen I can't even go into the Mall at Christmas I get overwelmn
Excellent write Nosheen we are all guilty of passing by, I buy online and haven't carried cash for over a decade. But your poem also applies to families who pass on by each other and to the elderly who never get a visit. Top marks again.
This is an exceptional piece.......thanks for sharing...