Malini's Dream. Comments

Dont worry about rhyme. Rather Do worry about your expresive talents.

Some dreams are unforgetable. Nice poetry

Great poem. But it could have been more rhyming like your other poems

well meriam is that malini our classmate? ? ?

haha, i enjoyed your flight dream poem :)

It's fun to read, , very well written. :) Keep writing!

the dreaming girl is not malini and it is you (haha) well written dear.keep it up.God bless you! ! ! ! !

Entertaining, dreaming in a dream :) Sound fun to read your...write what you want, time to expand what in your hand :) _Unwritten Soul

great poetry and story telling...good job..keep it up! SG xo

This poem is so funny and entertaining. I love it and imaginary in this poem was describe good. Fanastic job 10+++.

I think a lot of Malini... I think her other name is Meriam the brave one....the poet This one is fun... well done Meriam.... Good story... Your Friend, Jim Troy

Yes really “It’s a dream I’ll never forget! ” and noone dare to do so. Its not just a mere dream and its very interesting indeed......Well Done...

Sure does sound like a dream to remember. More interesting than any dream I've ever had. Great poetry.