Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Male Mother Comments

Rating: 5.0

I had a bun in the oven
From which I suffered the pain
Out of desperation I took a knife
Straight I went to the room of operation
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Abdul Wahab
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Heather Wilkins 22 September 2013

these are emotions only a mother will experience. With a bun in the oven a lovely verse is created, An excellent metaphor Wahab. 10*

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Sallam Yassin 19 September 2013

the skin of gold and eyes blue Anglo-Indian by birth but her scope is the world and she will make u proud

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Harindhar Reddy 19 September 2013

Yes Wahabji each poet goes through poem while creating a poem. You composed little cute poem with immense feelings. It wonderful work from you. Fantastic write!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 September 2013

Hunger and the food bun of course anglo indian nice to taste the bun

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