Monday, October 5, 2009

### Male + Female = The M A N Comments

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A m a z i n g!
Female male together! Not at the same time. Although two in one! Lifetime endless! Evolution step down here! New dimension may be or not. It’s true, sometime male sometime female. Captivating entity! Feelings change auto? Nay, two form, one after another, senses change not. Eyes.. brain.. ear.. nose.. tongue.. skin..Lips..the vigorous signifier..the honeyed source.. all these give and take media sense the same.

When become male- oh! exciting the man anticipated, adolescent Adonis or cupid, gorgeous, strong and stout, vibrant; nonetheless endowed with wisdom.
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sarwar chowdhury
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Lalitha iyer 14 October 2009

let us march into a world where no males and females hold let us be more of humanes less of racists and terrorists let us be less of genders that kindles only crazy tenders let us be more of immortals clinging to the heart of affections instead of stinging passions and terrorising tantrums... let there be no more man or woman as man is not what manhood stood for neither knightly nor princely nor he exudes what manliness is supposed to be neither woman is tender and delicate and soft and courteous or neat and honest prostitutes too are woman not only of bodies but of thoughts and actions they too are robbed of feminine originalities let us march into a world where no man or woman but only fathers and mothers exist who are parents of universe offering security and soulfull wisdom to Orphaned multitudes victims of war, conflicts and..................

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Anand Madhukar 12 October 2009

An interestingly different piece, well argued and expressed.

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Shashendra Amalshan 11 October 2009

Hey Sarwar, First I got to tell you, this is again is a splendid work, loved the argumentative manner in which you express yourself. 'hey, listen, every female has a part of male mind and every male has, too'.. Hey I agree with above lines.. I recently got this mail from a friend, read and see....... 'When a Girl Cries --- The World 'Consoles' her But when a boy cries --- Come on man don't be A 'Girl' If A Girl slaps a Boy --- Definitely the Boy would have 'done something' If Boy Slaps a girl ---- Rascal doesn't know how to 'Respect Ladies' If a Girl is talking to Boys -- She is 'Very Friendly' If a Boy talks to a Girl --- He is 'flirting' If a Girl meets with accident ----- Then its 'mistake of others'If a Boy meets with same accident --- Bloody you 'don't know how to Drive' 'What a World is this! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! lolsssssssss.. The fact of the matter is these days i see lots of Iron Women, yet hard to find Iron Men though.. Well, your poem is good made me think....10++ cheers Shan

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Omar Ibrahim 09 October 2009

hattrick! ! ! !

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Chitra - 08 October 2009

Interesting and different! its like reading a research paper, well done!

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Antonio Liao 08 October 2009

marvelous poem with.... something that touches the heart and mind of man... such interesting idea can be a supplement to of psychology between the two sexes thank for the concept...God bless.... my friend and God bless...a 10 +++

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Bob Blackwell 08 October 2009

Interesting write, what you write is true, but a lot of men would deny their female part. Thank you I enjoyed your poem very much. Bob

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Mamta Agarwal 08 October 2009

female male together, woman man together. it reminds me of the concept of ardhnariswara in hindu mythology. man and woman complete amd complement each other. an acknowledgement of this makes for the man no need for subjugation or suppression. you have presented a very profound truth through this poem in a light hearted manner. one smiles, ponders, thinks and then exclaims Eureka... IO AND INFINITE 000000....... LOVE MAMTA

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I read this poem with a smile and may bre iam the one who agrree with you..iam the flower who can be a hard man when needed.....but i didnot folow what you mean by your title

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Ravi A 07 October 2009

We need not go to this depth- just think about the concept of Lord Siva and Lalithambika. Siva is matter and Lalithambika is the energy content. 'Siva sakthi Ikya Rupini' is one of the attributes of Lalithambika.

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Ency Bearis 07 October 2009

substantial write to those persons confused with their gender...good concept... a very nice innovative composition.....10

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Christina Phan 07 October 2009

an excellent piece keep it up 10+

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Mubeen Sadhika 07 October 2009

Male/female binary replacing one another. Emobodied into single. Configuring the both. Subjective bodies and objective minds entangled to form the wholeness is the signifying process. 'Embodied subjectivity is thus a paradox that rests simultaneously on the historical decline of mind/body distinctions and the proliferation of discourses about the body' says Rosi Braidotti. The metaphysical presence is in quest. The form is excellent. Amazing thought. Marvelous composition. Wonderful. 1010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010

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Ritty Patnaik 07 October 2009

an excellent piece of research bysarwar...i really enjoyed going through this poem.thanks for sharing. ritty

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Fay Slimm 07 October 2009

So very true that each gender has the opposite - - the counterpart - hidden inside - - so we can together make the wonder of something like your title indicates..... well thought through - - Fay

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Anjali Sinha 07 October 2009

wow wow wow excellent write two parts of one personality 'ardhangini' or 'ardhnareshwar' as they say in sanskrit nice very profound hey sarwar as always you deserve 100000000000+++++ lots of love anjali

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Kranthi Pothineni 06 October 2009

Creative write with a different style of writing. Interesting piece.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2009

A m a z i n g! Female male together! Not at the same time. Although two in one! Lifetime endless! Evolution step down here! New dimension may be or not. It’s true, sometime male sometime female..........this is universal truth andwho candeny the God's existence in us.... it is endless evolution and mmust be understood clearly....very good concept and in advisory form..i loved its contents....10 read mine o, mother....

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thsi si true poetry. i was once told that a real poem reads well no matter the form.. this is a prime example of this.. the words themselves make this good.

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Aziz Alkaabi 06 October 2009

Good work and some fascinating reflections on the creation of man!

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