Malayalam 914 ഭാഷാന്തര കവിതകൾ (14) ഈ താരാട്ട് നീ ശീലമാക്കിക്കൊള്ളൂ Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

I am deeply touched by the comments and observations posted below by noted poet Prem Nizar Hameed. Overwhelmed. I knew I had put my heart into this translation. But words of a peer!

" Prem Nizar Hameed rated a poem titled Malayalam 914 ഭാഷാന്തര കവിതകൾ (14) ഈ താരാട്ട് നീ ശീലമാക്കിക്കൊള്ളൂ 5- start ratings". Thank You, dear poet Mr Prem Nisar Ahmed

Also, you have powerfully and precisely infused the heart rending emotions into the translation. Hearty congratulations.

Dear Unni, You have well translated the poem into Malayalam Language. I read the original also. It seems that you have converted your waiting into a touching experience here.

This poem of Fatemeh proved a true challenge to translate into my mother tongue. Took days to find whatever rhythm I could render to it.