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ജീവന്റെ കണക്കെടുപ്പ്(Malayalam) Comments

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ഓട്ടുവിളക്കിലെ കരിയേക്കാൾ
ഇരുട്ടാണിന്നത്തെ രാത്രിക്ക്.
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തണുപ്പാണീ ദേഹത്തിന്.
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Farisa Haleel
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Unnikrishnan E S 11 July 2016

Hi Farisa, A poem with very disturbing images; they continue to haunt the reader over his sleep. A poem of extra ordinary brilliance and poetic sense. Ottuvillakkile kariyekkall Iruttaninnatthe raathriykku What an astonishing choice of phrases, conjuring up a haunting imagery. And then, baakki vanna jeevan pizhijedykkubozheykkum ellattinum saakshi ninna mizhi melle poottanam. Manassil ashanthiyude kanalukall vithaykkunna varikall. Congratulations. Iniyum ezhuthanam. share chyyanam. a perfect ten for all your exquisite poems

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Farisa Haleel 28 July 2016

Orupaad nandiyund.... Iniyum ezhuthinte vazhikalil pinthuna nalkanuthakunna vakkukalkk..... vilappetta vakkukalkk...

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Akhil Raveendran 21 April 2016

you sound like, , familiar voice..

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Akhil Raveendran 21 April 2016

MAYBE.. ANY WAY GOOD KEEP IT UP..

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Farisa Haleel 21 April 2016

Am just said.k. Thank you...

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