Thursday, May 28, 2015

Malanni, My Love Forever Comments

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Hand-in-hand I walked her
Into my heart’s garden
A rendezvous with my lover
Where time is forgotten
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Paul Sebastian
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Amitava Sur 10 June 2015

A lovely imagery is elaborated here in this poem with the warmth of true love and a liking for her. Very well written.

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Valsa George 29 May 2015

Though Malanni is a person of your imagination, you have treated her with the overflowing warmth of a true lover! Enjoyed this passionate fantasy!

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