Thursday, April 7, 2016

Malady Comments

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it builds in the gut
like a heavy metal
till the poison kills
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 09 April 2016

In icons persuaving the main cause of suffering for the human beings.

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Spock The Vegan 07 April 2016

There certainly is a lot of greed as the Panama Papers have shown and much before that. TFS

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Barry Middleton 07 April 2016

Enough for sure....................................

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Nosheen Irfan 07 April 2016

Another amazing write from your pen Barry. Evil in man is definitely like a disease that destroys n kills the soul of man.

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Barry Middleton 07 April 2016

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Evil and greed build up like a toxin the body cannot eliminate. Yes, eventually it kills the soul.

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Kim Barney 07 April 2016

You have uttered truths galore in this fine sonnet plus four!

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Barry Middleton 07 April 2016

The malady of humanity is selfish greed. Glad you liked the poem.

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