Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Making The World Familiar Comments

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I can see your eyes fixed
on me, so much distance
between us have we crossed.
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Daniel Brick
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Valsa George 25 September 2015

Two lovers staying apart and their lives and thoughts are like broken pieces of a jigsaw puzzle! If Fate chances, they could be assembled neatly! But it is as difficult as choosing the right book randomly from a big stack of books! However one day in future, they are likely to meet together as blessed souls, may be in another life! A poem... rather metaphysical in spirit! Enjoyed!

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Savita Tyagi 16 September 2015

To me this poem presents a glimpse of that mysterious world where by grace of higher spirit one feels a closeness and intimacy to its presence. It is a most beautiful feeling may be a little mystical to enjoy moments of unity in silence with your loved one either in this world or in higher realms. Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 16 September 2015

In many relationships, we are given some or most of the pieces of a puzzle, and for our benefit and the other's, try to work out the puzzle. Seldom do all the pieces fit, but a person emerges.

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Paul Sebastian 16 September 2015

How do piece together what's broken? How do we live with what we have chosen? Is it fate? Thought-provoking poem! Thank you.

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