Imperfect is this world,
So full of big challenges;
It brings hardships, trials,
Temptations, woes, and stresses.
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'Choose between good and bad, Making the right decision.' This should be the crucial thing in life.... choosing between good and bad, not for our well being in the other world, but on earth too! A morally uplifting write!
A beautiful poem, inspiring us to choose good over evil. In this world duality at times wars with our choices, but repenting and doing the right choice will bring us peace. 10++
Imperfect is this world, So full of big challenges; It brings hardships, trials, Temptations, woes, and stresses. A remarkable poem, sir Bernard.
Imperfect is this world, So full of big challenges; So inspiring dear Bernard................
It's both magnificent and remarkable, Bernard......................
A wonder of a poem, I admire your faith my brother! God is the true poet and he deserves all of our praise, Satan will not stand, in the end he will be cast into the lake of fire, great poem of faith! !
Very nice poem extolling virtue and wisdom. Making correct choices is so very important. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks, Savita. Such comment lets me make the right decision to thank youπππ
Wow! You are so very good at explaining things explicitly and honestly! I totally appreciate it, your poetry is very refreshing and I love reading it, your messages come through strong and clear! Your rhythm is impeccable, rhyming superb! Yes, we must always fight evil lest we be cursed and taken away from our Lord. One thing check typo on the word Imperpect - should be imperfect. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Thanks, Roseann. Your comment is treasured for more than two years nowπππ
Great representation......brilliantly penned.....thank u, dear poet...