Making Sweet Lovecake. Comments

'Just meliferous, treacle-thick, Ambrosial, candyfloss- stick' Rachel Ann Butler

Somehow, I don't get the impression you were talking about just baking a fancy cake in this delicious and sensual poem, Fay! As are most of your fine poems, it was a delight to read with wonderful imagery from start to finish. And though such a cake might indeed be quite delicious, a lot of crumbs may get spilled on the bedsheets! Another great write, Fay! Carl.

Its a good write... I just felt it needed a little romance

sweet.. i want :) ..... yummy.

Mix longing with passion, like its going out of fashion sweet kisses and cuddles, go in there to! some talking, some dancing, and a lot of romancing a recipe for life, and lovers to do

Fay, after reading this you have now made me love hungry. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. Hugs David

wonderful things go into a lovecake 10