Sunday, May 8, 2016

Making Moves (Haiku) Comments

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timely spring zephyr
listening to hip hop music
magnolias sway
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Govind Ramakrishnan
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Susan Williams 09 May 2016

Now that put a sprightly image in my mind- - -I like how the art of Haiku brings out the best in a poet- there are no forest of words available to camouflage our lack of the precisely right word. And this, Govind, has every precisely right word to paint the magnolias dancing in that hip hop breeze. Thank you for putting a smile on my face.

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Ms Williams, your words of encouragement have brought a smile to my face. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this Haiku. Thank you for taking time to let me know your thoughts.

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