Wednesday, December 29, 2004

Making Me Want You More. Comments

Rating: 4.4

From the moment i open my eyes 'till the moment i close them,
I have something on my mind
Its you,
No matter where i go or what i do
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emma anderson
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Tanya Stanford 31 August 2008

Very heartfelt and meaningful. Lovely plea for love to love back and remain true.

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Beautifully honest and meaningful. Esra Sloblock

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Andrew Jones 13 January 2005

That was great, very delicate and charming. If only more females could articulate their feelings like you.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 29 December 2004

Very sweet and heartfelt Emma. Feelings out in the open, for all to see - the way we all ought to be. Lovely poem H

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