She was walking on the other shore.
My heart wanted to run to her
on the other beautiful shore.
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Romance need a women also needs many things. Have a nice day.10+++++++++++++++
Dear Poet Dev, It is worthy to wait for someone who truly cares and is willing to be waited...(hehehe) .. Nice poem...I feel the anxiety and discomfort while waiting.... Sincerely, diane
My heart wanted to run to her.... expressing the feelings of a one who loves..Good Poem
Making me feel the pain of waiting, Oh dear Poet, you know there is a pleasure in wating, it is even thrilling, the intencity matters how deep you love the other, and how important he or she is.
such a nice poem.........it clearly expressed each and every feeling and the feeling how we feel when we wait for some body.......very well penned dear poet!
A BIG WOOOWWWW for this awesome poem.. Enjoyed every bit of it.. Very true and very natural poem.. Waiting for someone we love is very difficult (and even if they are coming towards us in their normal pace we feel they are doing it purposely.... Lols. Just kidding..) Beautifully penned.. A perfect 10+++
In love, waiting is a bitter and sweet thing. You wrote a beautiful love poem for Waiting. Enjoyed.
Hi, Good things always happen on the other shore and take time to reach this shore; and waiting is so painful. Controlled emotions. Nice poem. Thank you Dev Anand.
But she came slowly, purposely slowly, making me feel the pain of waiting What a beautiful words.! keep it up.
Sometimes, we have to wait in life. Life is not always smooth. Thanks for sharing.
The pain of waiting for loved ones is not bitter..though impatience is filling in mind one can eagerly wait for his/ hers love for hours and hours... Nice penning....10/10
You capture the pain of waiting beautifully. A lovely romantic write.
purposely slowly, - don't understand such tricks women like to make. but they are like this.
You captured beautifully '' the game of love '' in your poem - pain and pleasure always mingle, when hearts are in love!
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