Early rise, exemplifies
With baited breath, and focus
I took note, of when she spoke
Her promised hocus pocus
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So many ideas and concepts in this rollicking piece. A magical ride indeed. Lets hope the day was one out of a satin top hat.
Magical indeed! Your lines brought visions of a morning's dew-soaked meadow...drenched in sunshine and awaiting exploration with expectant pleasure...Well penned!