Monday, April 23, 2007

Making Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

First there’s the build up the tension inside.
The feelings and longings you just can not hide.
Weeks of waiting and wanting with cold lonely nights.
For the warmth and the closeness that we feel tonight.
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David Barlow
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Malini Kadir 04 April 2008

Straight title and straight to heavens in a floating ninth cloud!

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Dwayne Bailey 15 November 2007

beauriful poem a perfect 10. Thanks for shareing

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Princess Me 29 July 2007

Absolutely beautiful...passionate, endearing...isn't this a great feeling? I loved it! Love your writing David. Keep it up. Look forward to reading more.; -) Princess

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