Saturday, August 8, 2009

Making Love Under The Stars Comments

Rating: 4.7

I am sitting here till you will be here by my side making love with me under the stars
Thinking of our old days, when we were deeply in love but so out of touch
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Little Sunshine
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Romeo Della Valle 09 January 2010

I did it, too, I have been there like you, it feel great, wow, well penned, great job.; ..Hope you have the chance to read some of my poems, especially 'A JOURNEY', God Bless You, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Anjali Sinha 02 November 2009

lovely poem so sweet, so tender will touch the heart of stone and make it molten to the bone -10 anjali

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Yasser Koor 20 October 2009

wow i miss that way of writing what a lovely poem. this poem really touched my heart and it is deep and full of lovely feeling. it's mad me to remember lovely memories.it's made feel that i need to be a lover again... good work and full of lovely passions.

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Romeo Della Valle 17 September 2009

As far as I can see, your not such a little sunshine, you got a great talent, not time to waste my dear, well-penned poem, very deep, enjoyed reading it, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Hazem Al Jaber 02 September 2009

making love while all stars watching our love... dear poet.. i am reading it again.. so beautiful.. hazem

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Ken E Hall 12 August 2009

Lovely poem of love full of passion and youngness bears thru it....all you need is a magic carpet Thanks for sharing regards

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Hazem Al Jaber 11 August 2009

full of love and desires.. passions through a braveness.. with no shame to ask about a love.. so beautiful with a great huge love.. hazem al..

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Eyan Desir 09 August 2009

Good write....passionate 10s

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Meggie Gultiano 09 August 2009

a passionate write. and i am starstruck by your very romantic words.Lovely.. Hugs, Meggie

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 August 2009

'coz I was waiting for you to be here with me, To take away my lonely nights To dry away my waiting tears' ahahahahaha! mind-crunchinnnnnnnggggggg! 10+

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aww sunshine.. this piece shine.. love is good yes................ you got it.

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Obinna Eruchie 08 August 2009

A lovely poem full of sweet words.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 August 2009

Waiting for your love to come home to you, memories of family and home who does not dream of these sweet things Hati, hope he is good to such a sweet wife.. Andy 10

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