... Making Love ** Comments

Most modestic poem of making love…you’ve tailored nicely… But sensuality may be better option for ‘lust’… Ms. Nivedita UK

Beautiful ahhh amazing

Wonderful words and wonderful poem!

lovely poem with lovable words........ heart beating rhythm.......

Romantic and affectionate. Truly an episode of passion. DC

I enjoyed the expression in your lines of this poem. You definitely took me to another place, I think you know where. Well done.

Dear Love Dr. You are taking the readers somewhere until we reach the last line and figure out where the readers are. Regards, Nooruddeen

very exciting verse! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Short and good choices of words, hence the whole mood of that particular moment is captured all in all, just love it.TSG.M

Your poem is really exciting. You have been able to capture the mood of the moment. Congrats!

love nice i`ll give it a 10

i agree. very great. i love your use of words! ahahha 10+++

Very good use of context, I like the meaning, and you have a good use of words. I love it it is very sensual! ! ! Great Work! : D

The final two lines bring to the climax a description of the title of the piece very effectively. 10 for an interesting view on making love....... Fay.

wonderful love poem i think you named yourself love doctor was good

nice verses on love...10

Very nice vivid poem. There is sexual word towards the end of the poem if u can change.

I like the last two lines very much.

Poem warming up to end hot...enjoyable piece...congrats Eyan...10

It is amazing how many ideas can be suggested with such a few, but extremely valuable words....well written..10+++