Sunday, December 6, 2009

Making It Through. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The colossus of gigantic Dedication, piled high
with tasks on each skyline,
could make travelling pilgrims stop short soon,
shake life, and moderate
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Tom Balch 07 December 2009

Ian is right, profound indeed, a wonderful piece Fay,10++++ regards Tom

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Tsira Goge 06 December 2009

In freeing time, time will reciprocate. ...................................................... Is wonderful, Fay 10.............. Tsira

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Carol Gall 06 December 2009

...great write fay 10

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Catrina Heart 06 December 2009

Meaningful composition...great theme shared! ! !

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Ian Bowen 06 December 2009

Fay, very profound piece of writing.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Daniel Kempson 06 December 2009

Wise words Fay beautifully written 10Daniel

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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