Saturday, June 1, 2013

Making Glass! Comments

Rating: 5.0

The flame
Was more than a blaze
More than hot
Fervent ~ lascivious ~
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Poetheart Morgan
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Heather Wilkins 30 June 2013

nice take on glass making. a good read

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David Wood 08 June 2013

Making glass requires heat and sand. Relationships require heat and hope to turn into love. A lovely poem

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Stan Petrovich 05 June 2013

I see profundity here that really ranks with TS Eliot! Thanks, Mirna.~your friend Stan

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Sekharan Pookkat 03 June 2013

A poem is formed in poets mind after several additions, subtractions and divisions with words.your narration gives clear images of relationships which you prefer most.

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