Wednesday, June 26, 2019

Making An Angel Comments

Rating: 5.0

Of where you became an angel.
I was there and truly astonished at
how you could put up with that noise
that stabbed you as everything you were
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Julia Luber
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Jane Campion 26 June 2019

Dear Julia, the structure of your poem has become a structure in my mind. Wonderful!

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Julia Luber 26 June 2019

Thank you! PoemHunter would not actually show the exact structure because in the original, the bottom half is kind of split in two and making a shape in the middle- but PH, scooted it all to the left. I'm glad you read this!

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Julia Luber 26 June 2019

It does not fall into the visual template it was supposed to here on PoemHunter, as it does in a bronze sculpture how it is supposed to be. But still the meaning is overall the same.

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