Making A Fist Comments

The poem makes a profound impression, almost pertinent point.

I who did not die, who am still living, still lying in the backseat behind all my questions....I hold this part of this poem in high regard.

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Years later I smile to think of that journey, the borders we must cross separately, stamped with our unanswerable woes.

A very touching poem indeed. The road of life often offers bumpy ride and if we can negotiate it, well done!

...........excellent poem....I could never ride in the back seat again ★

Beautiful. The doctrine to fix the fist of existence. It's a feast of positive thought.........................................................Pranab k c

Very nice! A mother's simple loving conversation can stay with a child for ever.

Yea................ >.<

very...nice......really nice...i wish naomi didnt use religions in it tho -_-