Saturday, October 31, 2009

Making A Day. Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my deepest sleep I am weaving a dream.
I am sewing the hopes of a future scheme.
I hem an embrace for my lover and I
That never unravels through hurt or lie.
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Fay Slimm
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Georgia Girl 02 November 2009

Fay this is FANTASTIC! ! ! I love your creativity in this, making with love all of the things for happiness...AWESOME! ! an easy favorite :) 10

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Ann Beard 01 November 2009

May your days be as heartwarming as your poems. Thank you. Regards Ann

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Ernestine Northover 31 October 2009

Love it! Love it! A real dream of a poem. A pleasure to read and so well constructed and produced. Excellent words and storyline. Well done. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Bob Gibson 31 October 2009

In my dream i have prepared, the foundations of love solid with trust, with a little help from above building a future, to keep out the cold a place where young lovers, never grow old

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bye bye... bye bye 31 October 2009

Oh, this is such a cute embroidery! Especially the knitted house with country view! I loved that one! Thanks!

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Carol Gall 31 October 2009

fay you have made a marvellous day 10

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Kerry O'Connor 31 October 2009

I love this poem. Such care has been taken to extend the metaphor of needlework throughout which lends a cohesion to the whole piece. Lovely.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 31 October 2009

Beautiful dream Fay, dream on it's cold out there today :) Andy 10

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Sandra Martyres 31 October 2009

You have sewn a beautiful tapestry in your dream Fay...lovely poem...thanks

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rago rago 31 October 2009

good expressions with the lover making a day..........

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Daniel Kempson 31 October 2009

Good write Fay nice to dream Daniel 10

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Ian Bowen 31 October 2009

Fay, this is sew good. I am sure you will complete your tapestry before you wake. 10/10 Regards, Ian

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Stephen Stirk 31 October 2009

Fay, that is such a lovely muse. Just make sure that you have enough thread. Much enjoyed Steve

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David Harris 31 October 2009

Fay, keep dreaming as your weaving sounds beautiful. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Fay Slimm

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