Friday, May 15, 2009

Making A Child Comments

Rating: 4.9

Making a child
For giving love a dual name.

For saving its sense.
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Marieta Maglas
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Unnikrishnan E S 18 November 2016

Hi Marieta, Fine poem. Let's give him his own body, This most common clay which belongs to us, Let's give him the freedom to be born. Just reminded me of the famous song on Christmas by Bony M: When a Child is Born.....

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Ying Escalona 11 April 2010

making a child? oh yah.....i love i, nice piece Mayette...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 April 2010

‘…Of losing control /And fusion of souls, …’ ‘…The magical sensation…’ indeed and culminates in Proud Motherhoodness the Best Reality to view ourselves with relish …Amazing write…thanks… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Elena Sandu 10 March 2010

Here's one poem for my heart! ! the child who learn to love from womb-even before- the Love will spread around to more! thank you so much for write this beautiful poem! remembers me of an old saying: ''what is learned in the cradle is carried to the grave''

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Marieta Maglas 10 March 2010

From: David Simcox (Frankfort, KY United States; Male; 74) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 3/10/2010 10: 22: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Your poems Your works have a good deal of poetic energy. Of those I have read I favor 'Making A Child' for its profound simplicity, and 'Shadow of Life' for its bilingual lyricism. You are obviously a skilled linguist. My regards Egbert Simcox

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Pradyumna Jyotir 31 January 2010

what a beautiful way of expressing a desire to bring a child into this world....A chuld brought into this world with so much love is sure to blossom into a wonderful person.

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Tajma Hall 21 January 2010

I liked this poem. good work.

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Reshma Ramesh 19 January 2010

making a child with love.....good one

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Braja K Sarkar 13 January 2010

Making a child/ for giving love a dual name! ! ! It is really a Wonderful thought, truely poetic..I enjoy this poem, a beautiful creation...

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Akram Awadat 12 January 2010

wow good poem i like it

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C. P. Sharma 11 January 2010

An outburst of the bliss of being mother and a lovely interplay of soul. CP

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Marieta Maglas 29 December 2009

From: Janet Moore (South Africa ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 12/29/2009 2: 15: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Making a child New vision, so as to make every heart filled with love Janet

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 28 December 2009

the most beautiful creation filled with bliss

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Marieta Maglas 22 December 2009

From: Robert Kostner (New Zealand ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 12/22/2009 1: 24: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Making a child Invincible and powerful.Lovely poem Robert

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Marieta Maglas 21 December 2009

From: Robin Keaton (New Zealand ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 12/21/2009 10: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: making a child wonderful soft tender write............ Robin

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Elias Galvez 16 December 2009

vey nice poem, spiritual love making to set free a spirit from the doldrums of the spiritual dimension, clothing that spirit with flesh into the incarnate expression. impressive intuition

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Taylor Cook 02 December 2009

great poem.. :) very imaginable and beautiful

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Lola Habas 20 November 2009

Great poem, indeed. This is so beautiful! 10

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moribund love 02 November 2009

a powerful piece which is imaginative as well! 10

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Mark Wahlberg 28 October 2009

a fusion of emotions and love, makes alove child, secure and happy. 10

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