Wonderful concept. I think you could really develop this poem. Your first stanza was enough to enrapture a guy who just got done working on his car ;) . Obviously I've never worn make-up but the imagery was perfect and as far as I know, unexplored. This one deserves another draft. I love it.
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Wonderful concept. I think you could really develop this poem. Your first stanza was enough to enrapture a guy who just got done working on his car ;) . Obviously I've never worn make-up but the imagery was perfect and as far as I know, unexplored. This one deserves another draft. I love it.