Friday, January 2, 2009

Makes Me Wonder Comments

Rating: 5.0

if he was as fragile as he seemed.
(splinters of his heart
connected to his aorta
or to her veins?)
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Beverley Katherine
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Adam Parker 04 January 2009

Nice work, short a sweet and straight to the point. A worthy 10

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Raj Arumugam 03 January 2009

very clever lines; very original thought

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Joseph Poewhit 02 January 2009

That is a real interesting thought

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