Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, October 2, 2009

Makes Me Bleed Comments

Rating: 4.9

It makes me bleed and hurts most
Irreparable loss though nothing lost
It may not be material loss or damage
Makes you unseat and difficult to manage
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Ashton Weibel 28 January 2010

It pains and hurts my conscience I must go into oblivion with silence Knock the inner voice and ask for remedy Why life turns so hostile with such comedy? this is strong point in words i love it

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Pitilosi Mdala 14 October 2009

that's true God is kind to give us whatever we desire

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Severina Dsouza 10 October 2009

Is there any secret understanding or clout? Why sudden loss of battle and rout?

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Nagesh Ratnavelu 10 October 2009

Why to distrust and cast a doubt? Why sudden loss of face and turn about?

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Sunita Rao 10 October 2009

I must search the soul and repent No to further quest and consent Confine to realm with utmost sincerity Steady pace and no more hostility

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Venkat Ramanna 10 October 2009

It makes me bleed and hurts most Irreparable loss though nothing lost

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K.v. Subbarao 10 October 2009

It makes me bleed and hurts most Irreparable loss though nothing lost It may not be material loss or damage

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Darshna Chopra 10 October 2009

It makes me bleed and hurts most Irreparable loss though nothing lost It may not be material loss or damage

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Indani Narayan 09 October 2009

It pains and hurts my conscience I must go into oblivion with silence

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Lalvani Rekha 09 October 2009

It pains and hurts my conscience I must go into oblivion with silence Knock the inner voice and ask for remedy

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Vijay Suwarnkar 09 October 2009

will not stand up and face the weather Neither I will cry or continuously bother

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Sulochna Pandit 09 October 2009

Why to distrust and cast a doubt? Why sudden loss of face and turn about? Is there any secret understanding or clout?

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Raju Rajput 09 October 2009

It pains and hurts my conscience I must go into oblivion with silence

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 08 October 2009

An inward-looking poem…despite the external odds…with an urge and endeavour for equipoise and sangfroid…which is so essential for a life of meaning.

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Jigisha Vyas 08 October 2009

Why to distrust and cast a doubt? Why sudden loss of face and turn about? Is there any secret understanding or clout

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Maulin Shah 07 October 2009

It pains and hurts my conscience I must go into oblivion with silence Knock the inner voice and ask for remedy

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Suwarna Patil 07 October 2009

will not stand up and face the weather Neither I will cry or continuously bother

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Kamli Kamal 07 October 2009

Why to distrust and cast a doubt? Why sudden loss of face and turn about? Is there any secret understanding or clout?

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Sans Serif 07 October 2009

I am in love the word usage and vocabulary you have. The way the words flow across the screen, the way they sound musical. Great poem.

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Ketan Rajgor 07 October 2009

It pains and hurts my conscience I must go into oblivion with silence

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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