Saturday, November 29, 2008

Make Your Victim My Soul. Comments

Rating: 3.8

Dust clings to my eyelids,
insects dance on my broken nails.
A mouth half opened,
with once perfect teeth chipped and cracked,
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Brittney Karasek
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Chitra - 02 December 2008

a rhetoric poem with enchanting words

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 November 2008

I love your writes Britt.Theres some charm in those lines.Your captivation has made me lost in your world for a lil while.Excellent piece!

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Brittney Karasek

Brittney Karasek

Oklahoma, United States.
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