Thursday, November 12, 2015

Make Your Day Comments

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You cant understand
Whats really inside;
Your mind is too hardened,
Your hearts full of pride.
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Winston Edgar Hall
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Souren Mondal 12 November 2015

Once again.. In simple terms you capture something essential.. Honesty is the best policy when it comes to inter-personal relationships.. Be it romantic love, friendship or camaradrie, we should always be honest to others and ourselves... Thank you for sharing this poem... _____________ P: S: The final few lines - 'Draw the conclusion that To gain people's trust... Having true confidence Is always a must! ' - are really good... A nice and well written verse.. Thanks :)

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