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The moon sweetly poured over the window sill
and said ' Ye pretty maiden, say, what is your will? '
'The stars twinkle, the sun shine' said I
'Cherubic moon, you dine in your milky light.'
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truly beautiful...this could become a melodious song...wow!
Resh! This is a fantastic & fabulous piece....very good message...great write....
a dialogue between you and shiny moon...and a shining advice you receive...good imaginative write, Reshma...10
Ammmazing imagery! beautifull feeling emitting this poem........10
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8/23/2025 12:07:26 AM # 1.0.0
Lovely evocation reshma. The dark around you is beautiful, it is a shrine for the light you know, but the dark within the heart and soul, aahhh there lies the work of a lifetime. I am sure the inner places of you are full of glorious sunshine, so let the outer have its way, see it is only the eyes that fool you, your light is everywhere. Shaun.