Tuesday, December 26, 2006

Make Water Flow. Comments

Rating: 5.0

How, in such moment of time,
Doth thou come unto me,
Delivering such colours radiance,
Liken unto the falls of Niagara,
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Geoff Warden
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Patti Masterman 15 May 2007

Wow, this blew my socks off. It is perhaps the most spiritual poem I have ever read about this subject. Very wonderfully crafted.

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Diane Violet 26 December 2006

Wow, I'll say but somehow seems to harsh or loud for this quietly flowing piece of outspoken love. Beautiful Geoff............................Diane

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 December 2006

Metaphoric mind at work, here Sir G...You have constructed this work quite well 1 ~f.j.r.~

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Patricia Gale 26 December 2006

Beautful Geoff, simply and utterly beautiful....

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