Monday, June 2, 2014

Make Today Count Comments

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It is fruitless to furrow into the past
Let mistakes and failures, there rust!
Neither could I there, plant new seeds
Future is barren, nothing there, breeds!
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Paul Sebastian
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Lorraine Colon 08 June 2014

Impressive words - good advice. Yesterday cannot be altered - why dwell there.... except to learn from it. Today is important - our actions will determine what tomorrow looks like. Today's steps will leave tomorrow's footprints. Excellent poem.

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Valsa George 06 June 2014

A Lovely message in a lovely poem.... I love the opening stanza.... you have presented it with great novelty! When we are careful not to allow today to slip off our hands.... our future will be guranteed....!

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Gajanan Mishra 02 June 2014

good writing, I like it, thanks.please read my poems and comment.

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