Friday, February 3, 2012

Make Things Right Comments

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Connor Whyte
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Amanda Laurent 24 October 2013

Awesome - the strong desire to stand while you fall uncontrollably; one step forward, two steps back when you try to improve your life and make amends for your mistakes.

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Alex Medina 12 June 2012

Our poems are similar, at least in meaning. I enjoyed reading this piece.

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Samantha Rak 25 May 2012

Connor, I absolutely LOVE this one, short, sweet and straight to the beautiful point. Well done and PLEASE don't stop writing!

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Bella Hernandez 08 February 2012

Short nd straight to the point.... lovely ~Bella

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