Friday, November 27, 2015

Make The Static Go Away Comments

Rating: 4.3

Make the static go away,
the dead-dog depression;
the fleas tip-toeing across
my brain.
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Tony Kavuoti 27 November 2015

You described profound pain and despair so eloquently. Heartfelt and brilliant

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Nosheen Irfan 27 November 2015

Fleas tip-toeing across my brain..butterflies swimming in my blood. That's original. These expressions convey a sense of anxiety and depression quite well. Liked.

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Thomas Case

Thomas Case

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