Make The Pain Go Comments

Deep feelings expressed in a well texted and nicely encapsulated poem. Thanks for sharing Diane and do remain blessed.

If my sleep will make them go so that the will wake me in the morning, The pain better stay. Let me face the monster head on, Armed with nothing but determination, So that when am done with it am sure it will never wish to come back. Then I myself will wake up in the morning and wonder were the pain went

I want to sleep, To make the pain go. inner struggle, pain, sufferings, loneliness. all these human experiences you have portrayed in this poem in short verses. thankyou. tony

Beautiful expression, one can feel the pain while reading.superb.10+.......

Stand strong! For, there is hope ahead of you. Nice work.