Make No Attempt Comments

i like it alot, its simple but deep at the same time. i think my only criticism would be that the rhyming was forced at some points which made the sentence structure wonky and it was missing a few subject in, there could have been a few more (yous) 1 hour ago by Liz Smith

Gail Desautels Again.. What is wrong with years for both men and woman.. It is a sign of sensitivity and human ness.. Likelihood high of being able to empathize with others... 2 hrs · Unlike · 1

Gail Desautels Not years... Tears.. Duh editor drone dear. The water that comes out of your eyes... Stupid male.. 2 hrs · Unlike · 1

Gail Desautels Or are you a stupid female drone... Ran Into a few of those today too.. 2 hrs · Unlike · 1

Gail Desautels Dead giveaways... Literally 2 hrs · Unlike · 1

Hasmukh Mehta welcome JaiRam Tiwari and Rajesh Jaiswal like this. 2 secs · Unlike · 1

To the point Ben Lindblom4 minutes ago Nice

Good. Sam RajLess than a minute ago Good subject Good expression Good comparison Keep writing Comment +1

Explaining life. Roberta MackoLess than a minute ago Such a sincere way to explain Life, Love, Happiness, Pain, and sometimes greed.

I shall turn you into gold So that can be noticed by whole world