Tuesday, January 28, 2020

Make My Death Start Of A New Flirt Comments

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Close my eyes with tears of thankfulness,
Open my blocked arteries that stop the flow,
Open my heart with a flower of forgiveness,
Make my blood a carrier of the molten glow!
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 January 2020

A fabulous poem that welcomes death with a profusion of poetic expressions and the beginning of a new romance. wonderfully penned.....10

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Bharati Nayak 28 January 2020

Close my eyes with tears of thankfulness, Open my blocked arteries that stop the flow, Open my heart with a flower of forgiveness, Make my blood a carrier of the molten glow- - - -An exquisitely beautiful poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 January 2020

exquisite piece of soliloquy sir r u also a flirt lol we all r Sweetheart you attacked the heart of a lover so brave, Make my death a smile no worry no sorrow no tears! > > > > > > > > THIS IS THE ACTUAL GIST OF MY POEM MOMS SMILES

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