Tuesday, June 28, 2016

Make Music Comments

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Tom Billsborough
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Pamela Sinicrope 28 June 2016

Hi Tom, I agree that the corset-driven verse is gone! :))) I love that idea. Its awesome. Make the music and make it sing. I read a poem yesterday that was all about movement....loved it.

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Tom Billsborough 28 June 2016

I remember Sylvia Plath's transformation after a period of instruction under Robert Lowell at, I think, Yale anyway Ivy Leaf. After that her verse really took off and I think her poem Daddy is the best poem written in english since Eliot's East Coker. Both have a wonderfully free music, as do many of Lowell's. Sadly in England a habit of tight verse has emerged. Not my cup of tea. Actually I hate tea. Maybe you Americans have a freer style. Certainly the best modern verse I've read comes either from the States or Ireland. Tom

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 June 2016

Compose a lyric. Make it sing. The corset driven verse has gone. The birds are calling one to one. beautiful expression. nice poem. 10 for sharing the poem. Subhas

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Tom Billsborough 28 June 2016

Thank you, Subhas. You have many good lyrical writers on the Indian Sub-continent. Lots of heart too. Tom

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