*make Me Yours* Comments

wow wow shiza... really beautilful. whoever it is for is very lucky..10/10

Nice n cute writes......hi shiza.....wishin the best you'd get! !

nice metaphors, it is unique. well done

this poem is sure different, nice writing

A beautiful touchy and lovely poem. Love it and added 10 to it.

This one i liked. Give new dimension to your thought.

well written indeed..............10

delicious piece..........

u can make me ur reality Awesome lil girl you have done us proud rehan

I agree with thai....capturing an important truth not in a sophisticated way, but all the more charming for it shiza.

Shiza what man could turn down such a beautiful offer...10

this is such a beautiful poem. well written. touched my heart.

I liked this very much shiza, it has a gentle charm that only youth and love can seem to combine, not sure about the spellings but it's your generations thing and I am sure they get it just fine. In this poem you speak of the trust that love needs to fully fly...A pleasant first read. Smiling at you, Tai

A must read poem for any man who wants to find a grl. I prize the same qualities in a man myself.