~ Make Me Your Me ~ Comments

a simple straight forward poem directly from the heart.. no twisted approach or philosophical yet conveys the feelings.. and thats what makes this poem a reader friendly poem... totally enjoyed reading it

Terrific write up…well metered very much updated trendy style Finish is jocund, ‘Make me your me/If so /I’ll say okey-dokey! ... The title is eloquent, silvery, ‘Make me your me 10++

Rhymed poetry…as commented by others Title is excellent. ‘Fill my tub /Effulgently spilling. ‘…Wonderful imagery tub? Bosom spilling Love… ‘Make me your me/If so /I’ll say okey-dokey! ’…fantastic finish enjoyed much 10++

a poem with rich and innovative idea..loved it

' Make me your me' Beautiful rhythm. Expressed well. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+

''Love me why? ' deep question...wonderful meditative poem belonging to lyrism 10/10/10 Mari

This is a humorous poems from the heart. I love the title Make Me Your Me. I'm itsy-bitsy; I'm itty-bitty; I'm wee. If you make me your wee I'll say 'okey-doky'..chimes and rhymes are stupendous

I especially like the line 'MAKE ME YOUR ME' this was really fun

Make me your me If so I’ll say okey-dokey! - Nice nifty words to express your love heart's deep desire so nicely clubbed. 10+++ Gautam

your words are full of imagination i wonder if u are in love 10-

very very cute! ! ! very well crafted and expressive short verses! ! !

a mature...poetry....i ever love....God bless....a 10 +++

This craft has evidence of strong play of words, wonderful!

Like informal dialogue noetically. Excellent lambent wordsmithing! Talented display Ten+++

Nice rhythm, smooth flow, a well penned piece.

Expressionism rendezvous with parameters of verbal duality in words.Thats how you chase them i guess.Voted pleasure for your request.Thanks. Amit Ray, Chelsea Harbour, UK

ammmmmmmmmmazing thought out! fine rhythm! 10+

nice lyric poem, lovely to read.....10

Interesting display of words. Wonderful.

I’m itsy-bitsy I’m itty-bitty I’m wee Make me your me If so I’ll say okey-dokey! .lovely and great feeling of attachment in ur poem dear...keep on writing....10 read mien marry to marry....miss i missu