~ MAKE ME YOUR ME ~
Ms. Nivedita
25.09.09
UK
Your love
I club.
Your love
My decor blurb.
In my hub
Feelings echoing.
Fill my tub
Effulgently spilling.
Say
Hey
Oi
Oy
Love me why?
Tie me why?
I’m itsy-bitsy
I’m itty-bitty
I’m wee
Make me your me
If so
I’ll say okey-dokey!
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This is a humorous poems from the heart. I love the title Make Me Your Me. I'm itsy-bitsy; I'm itty-bitty; I'm wee. If you make me your wee I'll say 'okey-doky'..chimes and rhymes are stupendous
I especially like the line 'MAKE ME YOUR ME' this was really fun
Make me your me If so I’ll say okey-dokey! - Nice nifty words to express your love heart's deep desire so nicely clubbed. 10+++ Gautam
your words are full of imagination i wonder if u are in love 10-
a simple straight forward poem directly from the heart.. no twisted approach or philosophical yet conveys the feelings.. and thats what makes this poem a reader friendly poem... totally enjoyed reading it
Terrific write up…well metered very much updated trendy style Finish is jocund, ‘Make me your me/If so /I’ll say okey-dokey! ... The title is eloquent, silvery, ‘Make me your me 10++
Rhymed poetry…as commented by others Title is excellent. ‘Fill my tub /Effulgently spilling. ‘…Wonderful imagery tub? Bosom spilling Love… ‘Make me your me/If so /I’ll say okey-dokey! ’…fantastic finish enjoyed much 10++
' Make me your me' Beautiful rhythm. Expressed well. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
''Love me why? ' deep question...wonderful meditative poem belonging to lyrism 10/10/10 Mari