~ Make Me Your Me ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Make Me Your Me ~

Rating: 4.5


~ MAKE ME YOUR ME ~
Ms. Nivedita
25.09.09
UK

Your love
I club.

Your love
My decor blurb.

In my hub
Feelings echoing.

Fill my tub
Effulgently spilling.

Say
Hey
Oi
Oy
Love me why?
Tie me why?

I’m itsy-bitsy
I’m itty-bitty
I’m wee
Make me your me
If so
I’ll say okey-dokey!

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 12 May 2010

''Love me why? ' deep question...wonderful meditative poem belonging to lyrism 10/10/10 Mari

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 16 April 2010

This is a humorous poems from the heart. I love the title Make Me Your Me. I'm itsy-bitsy; I'm itty-bitty; I'm wee. If you make me your wee I'll say 'okey-doky'..chimes and rhymes are stupendous

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Terence George Craddock 08 April 2010

I especially like the line 'MAKE ME YOUR ME' this was really fun

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Gautam Sen 11 March 2010

Make me your me If so I’ll say okey-dokey! - Nice nifty words to express your love heart's deep desire so nicely clubbed. 10+++ Gautam

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Carol Gall 06 January 2010

your words are full of imagination i wonder if u are in love 10-

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Aastha Uppal 09 July 2010

a simple straight forward poem directly from the heart.. no twisted approach or philosophical yet conveys the feelings.. and thats what makes this poem a reader friendly poem... totally enjoyed reading it

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Bachha Chakravorty 03 June 2010

Terrific write up…well metered very much updated trendy style Finish is jocund, ‘Make me your me/If so /I’ll say okey-dokey! ... The title is eloquent, silvery, ‘Make me your me 10++

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Rhymed poetry…as commented by others Title is excellent. ‘Fill my tub /Effulgently spilling. ‘…Wonderful imagery tub? Bosom spilling Love… ‘Make me your me/If so /I’ll say okey-dokey! ’…fantastic finish enjoyed much 10++

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Afzal Shauq 29 May 2010

a poem with rich and innovative idea..loved it

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Ravi Sathasivam 26 May 2010

' Make me your me' Beautiful rhythm. Expressed well. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+

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