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beautiful, pure, delicate, indeed a good work..

A great sacrification and a good writes indeed Asif.Keep it up bro!

oh! what a romantic poem.i love it.

What a poem Bhayya, so powerful, hairsplitting fast, running through any heart.....We are all with u dear Bhayya........

With every beat of my heart It hurts when you say good bye, And with every beat of my heart Drops another tear I cry your poem has made me shed tearrrrrrrrrrrs A++++++++ and many 100000000ssssss regards anju

I must say Asif bhai, you have soo truthfully and sincerely portrayed the anguish and lamentation of your heart and mind in this simply beuatiful poem... It has really touched my heart and I couldn't stop a teardropp to fall from my eyes...