*** Make Me Or Break Me *** -In Top 500 Comments
Yes, miles away
your voice distinct,
far away
a cry is heard.
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Make me, the diamond in your crown, The moon of your firmament, The queen of your heart, The love of your life. Yours, everything in life One in you MAKE ME YOU MAKE ME OR BREAK ME ITS UPTO YOU Nice lines..Loved this poem. Thank you poetess.
Make me, the diamond in your crown Oh so beautiful Anjali. If this love is miles away let this not matter. Just read these incredible words each day to not be broken. Truly beautiful. Congratulations on TOP 500. Amazing! !
A great dedication to a special person, best wishes, The poem is really lovely.
What a poem of love he must be pleased with this poem you are his everything except the apple in your pie.. phew written with a magic style which is your very own +++++10 Nice to see you getting on with busy life regards
After a long long time, I am seeing a poem from you....this one is really sweet as honey , smooth as silk and heart stealing as a full moon...I like the sway in the poem, the motion is good too...slowly then the poem turns its direction and captures the reader.........wow is the word and 10 is the mark...
A perfectly nuanced write, with each feeling, each emotion stretched out on the rainbow hued thread of your beautifully woven words. A perfect 10[do you even need to ask? ]
A love so pure. Complete surrender. In Physics, Resistance = 0 makes the best circuit, the smooth flow of love electrons. The title of the poem itself is amazing and is extremely striking and amazing. Good poem and u get yet another 10.
Your fiery passion will completely melt the heart even though it's mles apart.
Hmmm...Mr. Mystical eyes has certainly captivated you young lady...! But from what I've gathered so far...he ought to be the diamond on YOUR crown..but all's fair in love, anyways....That's some paean on love you've written..And all the best.. Cheers. Subroto
The yearning so beautifully expressed! You are already a diamond! May the special (and lucky) person adorn it on his crown as you desire! 10++++++++++
This one pulled me under and wouldn't let me up for air. Breath-taking.
anja; li we are poles apart.SEe my 'Cry not' i rate this 8
How easily we set someone on a pedestral! ! ! ! ! It is so true. A sea of emotions so eloquently put. An excellent write.
Can he afford to make all what you want here? i guess not.At least the words will have a good breakthrough as it demands a 10 from me.
i like it a lot......and i know what u r talking about about, , , , , , i feel the same way
heart touching poem in a very simple language
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Loved it