Tuesday, July 8, 2008

Make Me, Let Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Make me the reason for
the sparkle in your eyes
the spring in your step
the ripple in your thighs.
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Yonela Mali 19 August 2008

it is a beautiful poem indeed...

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Edwin Empestan (alba) 09 July 2008

Very good poem! Some lines suggest eroticism, very direct and also some suggestion of 'copulation'. Anyway the style of poem is explicitly sexual. Maybe this is part of your hidden or subconcious desire. Go for it! ! ! Well penned.

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Marvin Brato 08 July 2008

Clever write about love poem... it is very romantic indeed! Many will be waiting in open arms! A 10.

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